You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to provide feedback for my visit to one of your restaurants, Faizee. We have been to Gachibowli branch on the eve of 15th June 2018.
One of my close friends is getting married next month and will be moving out of the country soon. To celebrate that, we have organized one small get together to spend some good time with all our friends before she is long gone. Most of my friends were already married so they were accompanied with their families which include young children. When we reached the venue, we were welcomed warmly by your staff and they guided us to our reserved tables which were decorated nicely. We did not expect that to happen without informing but to see that all of a sudden, we felt very much welcomed.
The service provided your staff is exceptional given my past experiences in other restaurants. The food was tasty and the Mutton Biryani which we were fed that day was one of a kind and all our taste buds got refreshed. The way it was served deserves good amount of appreciation for your staff waiting at the tables. And some of your attendants started to play with our young ones to keep them occupied most of the time, which provided us to have nice conversations which we did not have lately.
We hope you people continue to provide the customers with the kind of service we got the other day and we will plan to visit again.
Sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 57, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...ided your staff is exceptional given my past experiences in other restaurants. The food was tast...
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Line 10, column 222, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and all our taste buds got refreshed. The way it was served deserves good amount ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56976744186 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36572903727 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.9972992476 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162325129212 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625718171298 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344029574067 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101545755022 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171898229529 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.