Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are there shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Television talent programs become famous in all countries, including Indonesia because people love watching talented people from various backgrounds that they never see before. Whereas, mostly television talent programs of Indonesia adopt the talent programs from other countries only for entertaining people at home. I am personally convinced that this phenomenon happened because some reasons.
As we know, America was the first country that promoted American Idol as a famous and successful talent show in music industry. After that, many talent programs followed such as The X Factor, Master C...
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