You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mr. Sam,
I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to inform you about the party that I will organize at number 27 flat on the second floor where I have recently moved into.
My name is Ayoub, and I have been a resident at the same building with you over two weeks, and I hope to be friends not only neighbors. When I decided to arrange a welcome party for all my friend, I could assume that it may disturb you. Therefore, I would like to share with you some information about it to avoid any inconvenience might occur.
My wife and I will organize a party over the week end on Sunday at 10 PM. The party is arranged for our celebration of our fifth wedding anniversary which is due next Sunday. We arranged a DJ to play some musical songs, but we assure you that we will not raise the sound to avoid any noise reaching you.Few of our closest friends will come with their families to celebrate with us this special moment, but we requested them not to bring their kids to control the party.
Why do not you join us the party? It would be our pleasure to get closer with you and your family as a friend. You can come any time that it suits you after 10 PM.
Seeing you,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Few
...e sound to avoid any noise reaching you.Few of our closest friends will come with t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18890837116 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581896551724 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1537267514 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6363636364 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19267342741 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798728211808 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561953786886 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136787202772 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628624581749 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.