The graph below shows the cinema attendance of people on different days of the week in 2003, 2005 and 2007

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The graph below shows the cinema attendance of people on different days of the week in 2003, 2005 and 2007

Given is the chart providing statistical information about the proportion of people who went to cinemas during the week in 2003, 2005 and 2007. We can immediately see that, the most and the least preferred days of the week were Saturday and Monday respectively, in both years.

According to the chart, it is clear-cut that the number of people who visited cinemas gradually plummeted from 8% to 5 % during 4 years. This trend was in sharp contrast to the figures for Saturday, which showed a slight increase (by 3%) between 2003 and 2007. By contrary, any alterations were not observed in the numbe...

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