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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...pproximately 13%boyspreferred Swimming where as the number inclined up to nearly 24%for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...les upsurge gradually in netball tennis, Basketball and material arts touching 10...
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Suggestion: .
...%and20%incricket And other respectively . Secondly the flactang trend is observe...
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Suggestion:
... the first twogamethepercentageofboththe Gender quite different approximately 21%...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...proximately 21%girl Preferred swimming where as the number declined up to nearly 5%fors...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 114.0 196.424390244 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.00877192982 4.92477711251 142% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.26757987692 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.23187731715 2.65546596893 235% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640350877193 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.45097560976 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.206234656 43.030603864 382% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.75 112.824112599 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.23603664747 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 3.83414634146 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0428275345601 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195587341728 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214073776204 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0131497785724 0.15604864568 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245163711187 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.2329268293 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 61.2550243902 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.67 11.4140731707 207% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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