The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city center changed after improvements were made to the transport network, and the cost of using different forms of transport in the city.
The table and chart gives information about changed travel time after maintenance and different cost public transport in the city. I want to summaries and comparison this information where relevant.
The public transports are including in the table such as tram, bus, taxi, and car. Taxi is the fastest way of getting around the city after before improvement to the transports network. And than tram is the fastest way after maintenance. Car after improvement is average travel time slower. Bus average journey time after improvement is faster than before.
And now I want to explain about average cost per kilometer. The taxi is the most expensive from transport. Cots per kilometer 1, 00 euro, the car is more expensive than tram and bus. And than public transport like bus is the cheapest from other transport about 0, 04 euro. Tram cost per kilometer is average approximately 0, 50 euro.
The conclusions are public transport changes faster than taxi and car that is getting slower after improvement. Moreover the price of kilometer taxi is the most expensive than other transport with cost 1, 80 euro. And then sorted from expensive to the cheapest are car with cost 1, 00 euro per kilometer, tram with price 0, 50 euro per kilometer, and last bus with cost 0, 40 euro per kilometer.
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