Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means while others believe that these games are contributing to children development
In the tech savvy generation, the innovation of electronic games has not only sticked juveniles to computer screen but also shifted them to rooms in spite of outdoor. So as a consequence, computer games have become moot issue whether these games are beneficial for children development or they are having bad influence on them. through this essay, i shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertion and shape up my opinion by end.
Initially, there is group of people who believe that technical games are bad for children. they support thier views by emphasising that by concentrating on screen for long hours results in major health issues; weak eyesight is more noticeable. likewise such kids become glutton which later results into serious problems. After that, these games put deep impact on children mind that they went to state of isolation as they get distracted from the social atmosphere as well as from education.as a quintessence, a survey conducted by Britain university stated that 65% of children seems uninterested in recreational activities as they spend more time on playing computer games.
apart from that, some people believe that computer games are contributing to children development by manifold reasons. firstly, the impact of playing games is impronimprovement in hand- eye coordination.this increases the kids response ability. Moreover observing power also shoot up because young ones learn various visual skills such as; instructions provided in games. So it make them catchy. In addition to this, some games help in building the concentration of juveniles. puzzle and shooting games are good paragon of it. So overall interpersonal skills are improved through computer games making kids multitaskers.
To elucidate, weighing up both sides i believe that yet there are some negatives of computer games although there positives cannot be ignored. Parents should limit the playing of computer games for children in order to avoid it's harmful effects on thier wards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35220125786 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90881693011 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610062893082 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6208793046 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407163039955 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134242796388 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133320579225 0.0667982634062 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247297305272 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216695932232 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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