People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life.
What are the most significant of these problems?
How can these problems be tackled?
Large cities are considered a place of major civilization, with overcrowded of the population. Commonly, cities give mainly such opportunities as offering plenty jobs and quality education. At the same time, such cities have their drawbacks with which people face every day. In this essay, I will introduce most significant problems in big cities with which it habitants face in their daily life and I will give some ideas for tackling such challenges.
Firstly, people in large cities claim that they every day suffer from traffic congestion . Similarly, people often at least twice time in a d...
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Thanks for estimation my
Thanks for estimation my essay. You can also write about lack of green spaces and play facilities for children, air pollution and noise pollution, moreover people in large cities suffer from stress-related illnesses.
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Moreover it leads to traffic accidents and drive car in such conditions is dangerously.
Moreover it leads to traffic accidents, and driving car in such conditions is dangerously.
as a solution is for the government can be increase a number of police in more crime places.
as a solution is for the government increasing a number of police in more crime places.
Sentence: Clearly, this is can be difficult afford yourself many things seeing high prices, particularly for the poor since in big cities there is a gap between poor and rich.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to is and can
Sentence: To tackle this problem government should take some meashures.
Error: meashures Suggestion: measures
Sentence: As a way government should set up more traffic lights and also should allocate driveway for public transport and for other cars separetely.
Error: separetely Suggestion: separately
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 375 350
No. of Characters: 1815 1500
No. of Different Words: 189 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.401 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.84 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.54 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.323 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.32 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.559 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.088 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
I liked the organization of ideas.
You gave me a good model.