The bar chart shows the result of survey conducted by personal department at a major company.The survey was carried out on two groups of works: those aged from 18- 30 and those aged 45to 60, and shows factor affecting there wirk performance.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , affecting
... about the external and internal factors,affecting the work performance of two group of wo...
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Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent.data also colaborated in percentum. It can be seen that there are main inte...
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Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... It can be seen that there are main internal factors; team spirit,compt...
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , comptent
... are main internal factors; team spirit,comptent with boss and others.Both age groups eq...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Both
...am spirit,comptent with boss and others.Both age groups equally effected by team spi...
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Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Moreover
...e groups equally effected by team spirt.Moreover 53% youngest loose their performance be...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...e groups equally effected by team spirt.Moreover 53% youngest loose their performance be...
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Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: '53% the youngest'.
Suggestion: 53% the youngest
...equally effected by team spirt.Moreover 53% youngest loose their performance because they wa...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ted by team spirt.Moreover 53% youngest loose their performance because they want to ...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...me external factors effected performance .job security is less effected to age gro...
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Suggestion: As
...is less effected to age group of olders.As well as yongest much effected by the pe...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ected by the personal development factor .At least82% yongest workers have week pe...
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Suggestion: At
...ted by the personal development factor .At least82% yongest workers have week perf...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...2% yongest workers have week performance ,because of the promotion prospects;only ...
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Suggestion: Overall
...tio of olders effected by this aspect. overall ,it is evidence that mostly extrnal fa...
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Suggestion: ,
...olders effected by this aspect. overall ,it is evidence that mostly extrnal fact...
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Suggestion:
...by this aspect. overall ,it is evidence that mostly extrnal factors are effected...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tors are effected performance of workers .although personal development effect ver...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, at least, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92715231788 4.92477711251 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31071518725 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655629139073 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3878994678 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 223.75 112.824112599 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.75 22.9334400587 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.23603664747 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139391093864 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856781428638 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031557744178 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856781428638 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031557744178 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.2329268293 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 61.2550243902 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.71 11.4140731707 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.06136585366 128% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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