In many countries, women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their income and do not require security from man can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Marriage is very vital bond between two souls. in this modern era, a man has progressed from working barefooted in the jungle to take first step on the Moon. Nevertheless, there are some issue which remain irrovacable and as complex as ever. The given topic asserts that, woman who earned money; should not get married. I shall explore the same by various aspects in upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, there is a group of people who believe that, womens no number feel any need to get married. Firstly, they convincing their viewpoint by claiming that, woman lost their trust from married life, because of domestic violence. Dowry system is the main reason behind this action. Girls are scolded and get ill-treated by their 'in laws'. This is proved by a survey conducted by Indian government that, most of the womens are mentally upset after getting married. They do not allowed to communicate with friends. This is all because of pressure imposed by the 'in laws'.
Furthermore, females also believe that, after marriage, their dreams would be vanished. They never achieved their goals which they makes in their life. Moreover, they have to be totally dedicated to their family and children as well. They would not have any time to spend with their parents. From another aspect, they are now well educated and doing well jobs equally as male. t
They also have similar opportunities for employment. Now, they are eligible to make good earning, and also, more self confident. That is why they feel reluctance, when question arises on getting married. While, in earlier time, womens were not educated as today, and they must had to depend on their life partner. But, now nothing is happening like this.
To recapitulate, we can see that, there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, womens have their own life. No one has any right to pressurise them for getting married. It should be their own choice. So that, they never regret on their decision in their whole life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'communicating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: communicating
...er getting married. They do not allowed to communicate with friends. This is all because of pr...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...y never achieved their goals which they makes in their life. Moreover, they have to b...
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Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...e now well educated and doing well jobs equally as male. t They also have similar opportu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89970501475 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39260498408 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587020648968 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2004855485 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.5185185185 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5555555556 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238114737554 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627733986147 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493734864709 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134426924774 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695533144566 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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