The table below gives information about Favorite pastime in different cauntries in percentage. (/means data not avilable)
The tabular chart reveals the information about the seven pastimes activities which are performed by 30-50 years old in eight different nations. The data is calibrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that Japan is only nation who performed an activity that is reading, and as well as Japan has highest percentage in reading upto 60.
It is crystal clear from the table, Canada is participated in seven activities but it has highest percentage in telivision. In addition to this, England has participated in four activities but it has been least percentage in music. However, in France reading, hobbies and music has 30,20 and 4 respectively.
As far as, trend is concerned that Australia, Korea, China and U.S.A are participated in all activities. Moreover, Australia has highest percentage in telivision as compare to other activities, either or Korea and china has been same percentage in reading. Furthermore, in Korea nation music, beach and sleep activities has 2,2 and 4 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...y that is reading, and as well as Japan has highest percentage in reading upto 60. It is c...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...participated in seven activities but it has highest percentage in telivision. In addition t...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'been the least'.
Suggestion: been the least
...ticipated in four activities but it has been least percentage in music. However, in France...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...ed that Australia, Korea, China and U.S.A are participated in all activities. Mor...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...ed that Australia, Korea, China and U.S.A are participated in all activities. Mor...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ed that Australia, Korea, China and U.S.A are participated in all activities. Moreove...
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Line 4, column 125, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
... in all activities. Moreover, Australia has highest percentage in telivision as compare to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30120481928 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06493331555 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7363494163 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7777777778 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0559236968688 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237173686846 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503776780054 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401983582196 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696255988172 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.