Some people think that several short holidays from school are better. While others think one long summer holiday for the year is better for childern. Discuss and include your own opinion?
The holiday season is a perfect time for childern to refresh their mind and has break to their daily routine. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that are the holidays are benificial for childern in short time or long term? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
In one side, there is group of people who believe that short holidays are better for childern. However, we are linked study and more quickly concentrate on the study. We also do our pending work in short holidays. Moreover, we are more energetic about study and other activities. Furthermore, It is clarify with the help of survey conduct by Cambridge University 8 out of 10 childern are believe that short vacations are good for childern.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that long summer holidays are the benificial for childern. Moving ahead, we have chance to polish our skills in long holidays. After this, the development of childern(all round development) is possible only long holidays. We also perform lots of activities in our home and there is no burden of study. Beside, it is clarify with the help of survey conduct by Delhi University 7 out of 10 childern believe that long summer holidays are better for childern.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinions, I believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. Both the short and long holidays are helping to polish our skills and little bit refreshment of our brain to daily works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: clarified
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87197231834 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59664547781 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498269896194 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4741184623 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288818398251 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998906880503 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109969731359 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17209740644 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670726107987 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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