To the environmental project manager to offer your help
Dear Sir,
I have just heard about your environment projects which are advertised in the local newspaper. I am really keen on giving you a hand on these projects at the place I am living. Therefore, I am writing to you with a view to offering some helps.
The most serious problem which local habitants are suffering is noise pollution. From several months ago until now, there is increasing number of karaoke clubs built in my town. It creates a lot of noise which affects negatively citizens, specially the elder and kids. They find it difficult to get deep sleeps; hence they always feel stressful.
From the terrible issue, I propose that these harmful activities need to be stopped immediately. To solve this problem, I would like to participate in the projects as a member who can organize meetings among local people, authority and club managers in order to discuss the problem and find out the best solution to limit its bad effects. Besides, in the future, to avoid meeting this state, we should convince the mayor pass strict regulations on club activities. For example, these clubs are only allowed working from after 9 a. m to before 9 p. m except lunch time.
I hope that my suggestion for these environmental projects is seriously considered. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Hoang
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87224669604 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68693578284 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68281938326 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2005477876 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.125 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152239738821 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401090849779 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565207302714 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807278384026 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596586425764 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.