An old friendis coming to town and has invited you to go to the cinema. Write to your friend. In your letter
Explain that you are unable to come
Find out how long your friend is stayingin town
Arrange a suitable time to meet
Dear Jane,
I hope this letter finds you well. I got so happy when I heard you are coming to Newyork next week. Sorry, I didn't write to you earlier because I’ve been so busy with my work these days and I have to work until midnight every day because of the new project I'd before said about to you. And thank you for your kind invitation to the cinema next Monday. I'd love to come with you, but unfortunately, I'm going to present some details of the project at an important meeting next Monday. So, I’m working hard on it.
I really want to know how long you decide to stay in Newyork because I’d really like to catch up with you as soon as possible. I will be free next Wednesday. So, It will be great for going to the cinema on Wednesday if possible for you.
Listen! I have a good plan. As you know next Friday will be my birthday. If you can stay here until next Friday, I will hold a small birthday party with some of our high school friends. It will be unforgettable as we can meet each other after several years. Please, let me know about your plan for next Friday.
I hope to see you soon.
All the best,
Sarah Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: didn't
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Suggestion: I'd
...ht every day because of the new project Id before said about to you. And thank you...
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Suggestion: I'd
...d invitation to the cinema next Monday. Id love to come with you, but unfortunatel...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ve to come with you, but unfortunately, Im going to present some details of the pr...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...for you. Listen! I have a good plan. As you know next Friday will be my birthda...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27272727273 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16032978811 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9898086537 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.75 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1875 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210913394925 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704456663802 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620924188634 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128205068926 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485086460879 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.79 7.59969072165 76% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.