The internet
Some people think that the internet gives people a lot of valuable information. Others believe that the access to the internet in order to get information drive problems to arise. This issue is a controversial one, but from my standpoint, a close examination reveals that the internet is a great resource of beneficial information. This is because of two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the information that people get from the internet helps them to enhance their lives. It goes without saying that people want to develop their own lives, and they work for it extraordinarily hard. Moreover, getting to know valuable information about different topics of live could play a massive role in improving life on earth. My own experience is a compelling example of this. My mother told me that when she was ten years old, life was hard and simple no cars in Yemen, and all the people were riding their own horses. Until the internet was allowed in the country; in fact, people were searching about several things that would make the life easier and more advanced. Therefore, they succeed in doing so. In addition, individuals back then had their own cars, and there were some buses that navigate people to their jobs, schools, and so forth.
Not only do information people get from the internet aid them to develop their live, but it also lends them a hand to understand things that they could not comprehend easily. People suffers from not understanding things that are exceedingly hard. Hence, individuals use the help of others to fully comprehending these hard topics, principals, and so on. For instance, when I was at the age of ten, I was not a smart student because I could not understand things properly likewise my classmates. Indeed, teachers got bored of me for asking them a huge amount of questions every day so did the students. Until one day, I determined to find answers for my questions, so I asked my best friend to lend me a hand. Henceforth, he suggested me to seek for these answers using the internet. In reality, my way of contemplating of different things in life, and my ability to thing in an appropriate have increased in a way that was superb. Consequently, my scores were the best among other students in my school, and teachers respected me more than the past.
In conclusion, based on the reasons explored above, I am off the opinion that in most cases the internet gives people a substantial amount of great information. This is because it aids people to get the information they want to improve their lives, and it helps them to comprehend things that are hard to understand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 516, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...ise my classmates. Indeed, teachers got bored of me for asking them a huge amount of que...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78213507625 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73906554372 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503267973856 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2257154169 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4347826087 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9565217391 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04347826087 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180414394305 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682411914908 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095006853929 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150521581011 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855992932476 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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