The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000.
The given circular layout and histogram reveal the information about that consumption of water by different types of nation in 2000 and data is calibrated into per centum . It is clear and coherent representation.
Overall, it is the evident, that In India has maximum amount of water consumption as well as into all have capacity of water consume on agriculture.
On first side, which all world of water consume capacity is into three categories ; agriculture, demonstrate, industry. However, either use of water into domestic or industry are 22%, 8% as well as into agriculture is 70% of water consume ability.
On other hand, In four country are presence there of water capacity. Moreover, In Canada, new Zealand, China can water consume capacity of data is 80%, 44%, 46%, 69%, 22%, 9%, 12%, 8% respectively. Regarding this, In same three categories as all world water consumption presence into all data of categories presence there. however, instead of all other three country new Zealand is one of that nation because these country of data are nearest amount of agriculture and domestic. As well as minor amount of industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, regarding, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08064516129 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82748166355 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1961281528 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176779393186 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713212987907 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573316045127 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116648556483 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410468123915 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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