New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children.
Do you think the disadvantages outweight the advantages?
Science and technology is now developing new devices day by day which helps human beings in their whole life time.Nowadays, females have more time and are able to do work and as well as manage their house with their children by the help of households equipments.In my opinion,disadvantages outweight the advantages by useful works by the appliances.
Life is unable to move without the equipments which are basic needs for everyone.Furthermore, women are using them which let them to loose time and help them to do work in few time.Females are able to complete whole works in short period of time.For example, in the context of abroad country ,people both males and females are too busy in their work and are unable to give time for family especially children. But these days ,they are using new technology which make them easy to mange time.Therefore, new equipments related ti households play significant role in both women and men life.
Although,women are too busy in their work due to which they are unable to care their house as well as children.Due to this,there are lots of problems.However, new appliances are being one of the useful devices to care their children and follow their responsibilities of works. For instance,in context of Nepal, nowadays many females are working for their children's career.But they cant afford time.In addition, by ueing mobile phones ,internet they are connected with their family members. They know eachother and every things done by their children.This is the reason that science and technology has great changes in human life which makes their life effective and happy.
In the conclusion, technology is one of the basic needs of human beings,noone can run their life without it.Likewise,the technology helps to work and run a house in same period of time without any difficulties. Therefore, life is full of happiness and joy by the valuable and new discovery of household equipments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 965.302439024 168% => OK
No of words: 317.0 196.424390244 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1167192429 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18168476647 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488958990536 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 283.868780488 182% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.5534606522 43.030603864 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.75 112.824112599 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.625 22.9334400587 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.125 5.23603664747 327% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 1.69756097561 1944% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269734345484 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12417184534 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724538781957 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176904095387 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717111939426 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.2329268293 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 61.2550243902 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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