Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friend. This has had a negative effect on their social lives.
To what extent do u agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that advancement of technology has transformed the people'scommunication, so that the people
can contact via email or messaging. Although some people think that this development can have a detrimental impact on
social life,because people will have reduced the amount of time to meet their friends, I believe it is not totally true.
Looking back on past, people communicate with friends via letter and phone. However, these two ways take a long
time and are quite expensive for users.Being busy and far distance make it hard for people to have a face to face meeting
also. As a result, the relationships tend to be faded away over time.
Nowadays, almost people use modern form of communication such as email and messaging which is much more
convinient owing to their benefits, Firstly, everyone can send an instant mesage to their friends everywhere with a very
cheap price. Secondly, these modern forms are updated so that people can send out voice messages,pictures, emojis
making the content of the conversation more interesting. For example, in my case, I have some foreign friends who I still
keep contact with them through messengers. As a result, my social circle is bigger and I can broad my mind by chatting
with others come from other countries.
I think it is also difficult to argue that electronic email and messaging have reduced the amount of people see each
other. In contrast, people are spending more time to hang out with their families and friends in the parties, events or
entertainment areas.
In conclusion, i entirely disagree with the statement in the question and firmly beleive that modern communications
have greatly improved people's social lives.
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also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96867145439 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596428571429 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0092820007 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346828236406 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119224460178 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080734361075 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101274538761 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780135244745 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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