people living in 21 st century are enjoying better quality of life compared to people who lived in previous era. do you agree or disagree ?
It is true said that "Technology is best when it brings people together". As we are living in the modernization, human has changed his life tremendously by walking barefooted in jungles to take first steps on moon. but still some issues remain irrevocable and complex as ever.for instance, whether the modernization has uplifted the living standards of people ? i completely agree with the statement and shall explore its various aspects in following paragraphs.
Technology is not less than a boon in today's world. Through the upgraded technology all the sectors of the modern world like education sector, health sector, agriculture sector have got uplifted and have become advanced.The progress in the education sector have taken place which now involves smart classes, online study material. The smart classes enable a person to inculcate deep understanding of the study material with the help of audio visual aids.The viewed material is learnt easily and gets retain for a long period of time as compared to the studies of past time. I would like to bolster my perspective by revealing the survey conducted by Indian government which stated that academic results have shown a rise by 60% after the introduction of smart classes in all convent schools.
Another field in which technology have shown great magics is the health sector. The medicine advancements have taken place so greatly that all possible treatment of incurable diseases lie in the hospitals now which has further decreased the mortality and morbidity rate to a great extent. for instance, cancer was once considered an incurable disease but now the treatment of cancer is also available in almost all the hospitals! The technological advancement have reached the peak of success and has taken the world on the way of progress.
So, I tend to believe that the technological advancement has chnged the world drastically and has reunited the whole globe into one single village.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, for instance, it is true, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91621092723 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9929600867 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0632242671674 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274720767996 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407978254288 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433903915309 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703459625047 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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