Currently there is trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine.However,at best these method are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In recent times, there is an ongoing fashion for consuming substitutes of remedies. In my opinion, these alternatives are not much fruitful and effective as standardized medicines. In some situations, it may be life threatening too.
Firstly, these alternatives are not tested in lab and unfaithful as compared to standardized medicines which are thoroughly tested before reaching to the end users. Moreover, it could have been also prepared under negligence supervision and also cheap and unhygenic products might have been used for preparations. Sometimes, it can cost individuals life too. In the year 2015, nearly 200 people died and 80% of it were consuming such alternative forms of medicines.
Secondly, it may not be trustworthy and can take longer time to heal the wounds and getting out of fever. The substitutes of medicines could be marketed immensely and available at cheap prices to lure customers. Packaging can look attractive but the ingredients can prove fatal to our delicate body parts. In addition, it can also take more days to recover from wounds or diseases as compared to authorized medicines. Governments should come up with initiatives of promoting more authorized medicines. For example, ayurvedic or homeopathic medicines take more time as compared to allopathic options.
In conclusion, people should be cautious and choose wisely while deciding which medicines to be accepted and refrain those which are ineffective and harmful to individual's body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05586620247 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2939388879 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111626809647 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035926073627 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314637793433 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660235971273 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00888318468694 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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