Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and
fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
Art plays an essential role to evolve the hidden prowess of the people but people ignore its benefits
and pay much more attention on the skills such as engineering, medical and bussiness. I personally
reckon that people are more conscious about their career and that's why they highly prioritize the
educational subjects than arts.
Firstly, art reflects our mirror image of ancient era and it's the way to connect ourselves with them
but visualization of the art in the traditional way detach us from it. It is pertinent to evolve the arts with
the modern time which transform the arts in the more fascinating form. People wants to bring the
opulent lifestyle by getting higher income which persuaded them to forget the significance of the arts
affected to their thoughts, culture and life. Arts such as drawing, dance and mimicry worked as stress
booster; as an artist many people also get name, frame and money which is ought to be higher than the
engineer and doctor.
Another main reason is the insufficient bolster of the government to the arts.Modern schools vitally
focused on the career oriented subjects such as computer, physics,biology,etc. Government should
thrive the importance of the dance, drawing, native languages, and aware them how it is beneficial to
their life. Art is helpful to reduce stress,entertain the people and somehow it is also worked as a part-
time or full-time source of income. Government-body should devote basic amenities of the arts which
encourage to satisfy artistic hobbies because many parents hampered their studen's natural abilities due
to lack of resources.
Agglomerating all the facts elaborated above it can be surmised that arts and other subjects both are
pertinent to thrive human life. So, government should make strict rules which persuaded the schools to
make the balance academic plans which cover both the subjects equally and produce skillful citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34838709677 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86784171966 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577419354839 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.5093013027 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 138.166666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231956796651 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865313285655 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501293651425 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616083154748 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618423681267 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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