Write a letter to you friend stating you have moved to a new city. In your letter explain the following.
Why did you move to new place.
Describe the place you are living.
Invite your friend to come and see you.
Start your letter with Dear Anna...you don't have to write your address.
Dear Anna,
I am writing to you just to tell you that I have shifted to Goa last month along with family. I had been offered a transfer along with a promotion from my company recently.
Goa is indeed a place worth living. Although it is a small city, it has many places which are worth visiting. It is well known for its scenic beauty which comprises of ancient churches, long beaches and tasty restaurants. It is one of the best tourist destinations in India.
I would be glad if you could come to Goa in the next summer holidays along with you family. It would be great if you could make it by mid of April so that you can witness the annual fair in Goa which is worth watching. Many people from all over the world gather here to be a part of this fair.
I am looking forward to meet you.
Your friend,
Manjusha C Nair.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... well known for its scenic beauty which comprises of ancient churches, long beaches and tast...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... of this fair. I am looking forward to meet you. Your friend, Manjusha C Nair...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2893081761 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22189784429 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647798742138 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5041647516 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300005015453 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106139142083 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095930139569 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152874291137 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575988771483 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.