Consumer goods have became the most important part of human life.do the advantages outweight disadvantages.
Consumerism is a social and economic idealogy that encourage people to acquire more products
and services in on ever increasing amount. Moreover, today topic asserts that consumer goods are very essential for human life; it is good or not. I shall explore my point of view on both sides.
One side of the argument people belive that consumer goods very benifical for people .The main reaon belive that it helps to develop economy .People buy many things and tries to fulfill their needs.As well as to produce these things ,government establish industries which not only provide employment but also pay role in economy development.Secondly, human also reliable on various good such as food ,clothes,
footwears, petrol for motor cars and on other sorces .Moreover they get satisfaction from these things which is a very important for every human.
On the other hand, people are also adapting a culture of throw away society and day by day buying a new things also sell old things.
Furthermore, human spend money on luxuriesthings and waste money.
Overall,consume goods are very necessary for survive or every human also depend upon these.At the last,it is said that"earth can satisfied every bodies need but not every body greed."
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21287128713 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88381102754 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668316831683 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.809790072 49.4020404114 328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.428571429 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8571428571 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136730773536 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627077693525 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747113476845 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602823243435 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505025161227 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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