What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
It is certainly true that living in a small communities play an important role in people’s life. Because of, many people today prefer to live in a small community with. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of the development of society makes people tend to move to big cities, as a result, the way people live has changed.
For this reasons why living in a small community gain a lot of advantages. First of all, the number of people is not as much as in a big city, so they are able to get on well with everyone in their regions. For example, people who live and work together in a field, including constructing their homes, hospital, and schools,... Therefore, this activity needs cooperation with many people to support each other, so it caused raising close social interaction among them. Secondly, life is very peaceful when the children grow up in the stable environment. Furthermore, there is always someone to look after the children and teach them a good behavior, so children grew up being polite and respectful.
On the other hand,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82608695652 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7879322378 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9073420291 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161394869765 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679459062842 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768185950336 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097139282287 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953648625302 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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