Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research , business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
In the modern world, the field that consist of scientific study, business and the academic world are rapidly increasing. People argued that whether these information should disseminate without payment and the information is more worth to distribute by this way. This essay going to discuss about people's views what they need to do.
On the one hand, without give money, spreading all information is crucial for human life. If they know the full information that can give benefit them, people could live more healthy by using the information. According to cancer research which studying by scientists, cancer cells like a candy much more as well as if you do not eat sweet , they can not growth. Therefore, people try to avoid candies by known. However, the companies that produce candy may be not likely to disseminate throughout world because of their profit. That is why some information need to share freely.
On the other hand, it is right that some information should share with bill because scientists would take so many time and much more budget to discover new breathtaking development. For example, for some nations, if they uncover important the finding, they have to take some money that is used continuation the experiment . This method would have efficient in both nations.
To conclude, I believe that scientists should differentiate the information to distribute without payment and with money. This way would give welfare in both human and scientists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
... increasing. People argued that whether these information should disseminate without payment and ...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion. According to cancer research which studying by scientists, cancer cells lik...
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Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ts, cancer cells like a candy much more as well as if you do not eat sweet , they ...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... more as well as if you do not eat sweet , they can not growth. Therefore, people ...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some information should share with bill because scientists would take so many ti...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... bill because scientists would take so many time and much more budget to discover new br...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...that is used continuation the experiment . This method would have efficient in bot...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nformation to distribute without payment and with money. This way would give welf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14644351464 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7096738291 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602510460251 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0931910728 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27831194118 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904191409528 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848566028961 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151121525239 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037549046724 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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