More and more people prefer to read ebooks rather than paper books.
Recently, a lot of people start to use e-books more frequently than to use traditional paper books. This essay will discuss the reasons of this phenomenon including portability and an effort to fight deforestation. This essay will also suggest that libraries will no longer develop and eventually close due to this trend.
To begin, e-books are easier to be carried than paper books are. The main reason is that a single electronic device can store a lot of books while paper books cannot be compressed in a similar way. Additionally, people do not need to use paper to read e-books. As a result, there is no necessity to cut down trees anymore, which is absolutely detrimental for the environment. Hence, it seems reasonable that people choose to read books using their gadgets rather than doing in the old way.
However, this trend will bring about repercussions to libraries around the world. Most obviously, many owners will think that library maintenance is irrelevant. If libraries are not looked after in a long period of time, they will need to be shut down. A recent study by Stanford University’s researchers, for example, found that more than 1000 libraries have been closed this year. Therefore, in the future, libraries will not exist due to the increasing usage of e-books.
In conclusion, this essay argued that people tend to use e-books for the sake of its mobility and saving our Earth. Nonetheless, this habit will give rise to libraries being ignored, which ultimately leads to their demolishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... while paper books cannot be compressed in a similar way. Additionally, people do not need to us...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ibraries are not looked after in a long period of time, they will need to be shut down. A rece...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06324110672 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82422061705 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596837944664 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4652173424 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.4 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193226160672 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720619401351 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097207475641 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107230155438 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634930744051 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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