Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Since there are several options regarding how and where to make a decision, our answer to an issue is becaming more and more complex. In some cases, people believe that it is a good thing to have an ability to choose from a wide variety because every single person has diverse tastes. However, there are also strong reasons why having a numerous choice can bring lots of problems. Such idea has raised different arguments among people who are concerned.
From a sociology point of view, human had a perfect life in old days when technically everybody was farming. That is the reason why a range of opportunities, nowadays, against this evaluation. I personally disagree with that. Each person has dissimilar abilities and fits a job not same as the others. If no one is the same, why would we want to do the same? Furthemore, different kinds of options give us to make our own decisions and become who we are meant to be, therefore, we have the right to choose.
On the other hand, there is one topic where, according to my opinion, we have many choices which make us to spend more time to decide. The typical example for this issue is one of our favourite hobby which is watching television. Almost people admit that there are a hundred channels, which are worth watching, are forced them to sit on sofa the whole day. From this point of view, I agree that too many options can bring negative impact.
In essence, the key over whether wide variety of opportunity is beneficial or not is an open mind question. If we are known how to deal with making a right decision, a lot of advantages would come to us. Nevertheless, if we not, we could choose others options again.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-30 | Yoyo1234 | 89 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | ermukesh09 | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-23 | aghalandar | 78 | view |
| 2020-01-23 | Ashkanian | 67 | view |
| 2020-01-21 | Amarpreet Singh | 78 | view |
- The plans below show the layout of a university’s sport centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew, human had a perfect life in old days when technically everybody was farming. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59666666667 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52555604439 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0861728997 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1176470588 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228842256904 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633689780371 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514580680415 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121595837721 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028406614148 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.