You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
1. describe the training course you want to do
2. explain what the company could do to help me
3. say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to a training course which I had seen in a newspaper advertisement later yesterday targeting communication skills. Training courses are the competent way to develop employees skills in the usual course of business.
The duration of the symposium will be 1 week, it will start from 5 pm to 7 pm in the evening daily. It will be conducted in the AMA auditorium, sessions will be lectured by Mr. Rajendra Verma who is a well-known speaker in interpersonal skills.
The company can aid in arranging the transportation for to and fro from the venue, which will help me avoid the waiting time for the cabs. Additionally, I would request for flexible hours during the training week, I will take care of my work and won't lead that to suffer for the training.
I strongly believe the interpersonal skills play a major role in my day-to-day activities and communication is one of them. Training will benefit me in dealing with clients and understanding their case in a more improved manner.
Thanks for your response.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir, I am writing this letter in regards to a...
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...be 1 week, it will start from 5 pm to 7 pm in the evening daily. It will be conducted in the AMA ...
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...known speaker in interpersonal skills. The company can aid in arranging the t...
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... lead that to suffer for the training. I strongly believe the interpersonal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87912087912 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01307379498 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0340149227 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285121578299 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112012674526 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701770743778 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15210855202 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807990869656 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.