some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while other think it is waste of time. dicuss both sidis of view and give your opinion.
with the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking a barefooted in the jungle to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues remains irrevo and as comlex as ever. The given topic asserts that is art subject are indispensable role in school or not? through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that is art subject are play's a crucial role in schools or not? they strengthen their view point by claiming that with the help of arts children are more creative. Because number of school are available in my country, they are mandatory to join the arts activities,and they are Sharpe the children memory. Moreover, arts activities also help for relaxation. There are number of childs only focus the core subjects,and theycan join the arts activities like sports games, music, art and so on.As far as, they can set the goal of his life,and they can join the futher couses of arts profession and game profession. The best epitome is that, 90/ schools are promoting the arts activities.
contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that is arts activities are only wastage of time? to make their arguments convincing they claim that some students are distraction for study, if they participate the arts activities. That parents are always encourage to their children to take more interest in the academic subjects like, mathematics, English, science and so on. Furthermore, some dweller think that they have no career in the future. govenment not provide good jobs for that purpose.
conclusion, we have seen, there are number of answer to this question. On balance, however, i trend to believe that it is a totally depend on the children to children which profession they want to choice make them fruitful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88343558282 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70782284603 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549079754601 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2575358156 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4444444444 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207666245248 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645499293451 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408901109327 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112164321495 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535678353571 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.