today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or antarctic.
what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.
Nowadays, the number of travelers who spend their holiday on destination with severe condition is increasing. While there are some advantages for the people who follow this new trend, there are some drawbacks that will be mentioned in this essay.
The main positive aspect of going to these hard places for the adventurers is the experience that would be gained from such journeys. These strange places not even come along with new challenges that might be unique but also the effort to overcome to these difficulties would teach them some precious skills. This, in turn, would lead to improvement to decision making and creativity as well as the ability to deal with vigorous situations. Furthermore, these individuals would be able to get familiar with natural and untouched areas as well as their culture, life style of indigenous inhabitants that remained less-known. For example, a trip to Antarctica and staying there for days would be beneficial for who want to learn about the Skimmers and their worlds.
On the other hand, there are some considerable drawbacks for these travelers. The most dangerous problem is the risk of death that might be happen for the explorers of unknown harsh areas at any time. The difficulties that exist in these environments which range from nature such as hard-climbable mountains, to wild animals predators as well as lack of proper facilities could give a rise likelihood threat of journeyer's lives. For example, if someone was injured fatally and required emergency medical attention, they have to wait until help came from closest facilities which distance might be too far and cannot be tolerated.
To sum up, while these journeys have so many experience-related benefits, the serious risks that might be irrecoverable and even deadly should be considered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: from the closest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18835616438 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84378373471 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6073611284 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0807776633247 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348760480133 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316735710093 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471609713674 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284975187832 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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