Current staus of education system in your country "what are advanatge and disadvatnage"
Recently, the current status of education conditions has sparked an ongoing debate and raised a moot question.
educationist and many leaders think current system requires improvement and have many demerits, consequently, they support the idea of modernisation of the education system. I inclined to think that the current system needs restructuring and this essay will illustrate the advantages and disadvantages of the current state.
To begin with, Indian education system follows traditional way of learning which has not been restructured from the ages. Current education system is based on bookish knowledge and prefer high grades than practical knowledge. Thus, many students mug-up the content and believe in securing higher grades than a practical knowledge of the subject as it is associated with social status. Coincidentally, studies shows Indians are good at cracking many theory related exams like SAT, IIT and NEET. For example, most of the US universities are crowed with highted numbers of Indian students as they easily crack the theory based exams.
In contrast, students from India are legging behind in terms of practical knowledge of the subjects as the education system is primarily based on a grading system. Thus, enforcing a substantial amount of pressure on students and their parents, which is creating mental stress and stagnation among students. For example, in last few decades, there have been many suicide cases reported as students were not able to cope-up with the failure and low grades.
To sum up, as per preceding arguments I can conclude that the current education system needs an overhaul for the betterment of the country and young generations.
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Suggestion: Educationist
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, so, thus, for example, in contrast, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2984496124 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79713136509 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.066588629 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.272727273 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135842259253 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529969981452 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606581782264 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765253152768 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666188930083 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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