The use of mobile phone is as anti-social as smoking. Since smoking is banned in certain places, using mobile phone should be banned as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,there is a controversial issue whether the usage of cell phones ought to be banned like smoking in certain places or not.In this essay i will support the idea that by prohibiting the use of mobile phones we can improve social well-being and it will be acceptable on condition that the government enacts some stingent laws to control the use of mobiles in specific areas.
To begin with,it would be a wise decision if cell phones are restricted in some places or circumstances.Since in most meetings or conferences participants are bothered or distracted by ringtones of mobile phones,making some people irritated. For example, in certain important business meetings businessmen cannot get along with their partners due to distractions stemmed from the cell phones.Thus, prohibiting the use of mobile phone in such kind of situations can be reasonble .
In addition, there are other conditions which mobiles should be banned. One salient example can be hospitals where require much more quiet atmosphere.Because some utmost operations are done there which demand peaceful places and patients also need tranquil places in order to be healed quickly.Unless the phones are banned there will be some unpleasant situations which if physicans are disturbed they may not do well their job and it simultaneously threats patients' life. Therefore, the use of mobile phones are prohibited strictly in some specific places.
By way of conclusion, banning mobile phones in certain areas can be a right decision which can improve any field perfectly and it can make contribution to social welfare.So we can reach this goal as long as the government give a helping hand.
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- The use of mobile phone is as anti-social as smoking. Since smoking is banned in certain places, using mobile phone should be banned as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The use of mobile phone is as anti-social as smoking. Since smoking is banned in certain places, using mobile phone should be banned as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14324824642 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.161770813 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.0 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.7667163134 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353640577802 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181140621342 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077849821807 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221059971727 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728759933833 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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