Some people say that it is important for parents to read and tell stories to their children, while others argue that with orther soucrces of stories such as books, TV and movies, parents do not need to read stories. Dicuss both view and give your own opinion.
some people hold idea that children should be read and told stories by their parents , while others people believe that other source such as: books , TV, and movies would help children to improve skills. In my view, both methods have benefit and nagative. The essay discuss and give some reasons for both views.
In recent years, parents have had to adapt to various changes in our society, they don't spend much time on taking care of family and children , thus increase between gap two generation because they too busy to communicate with their children. one of the methods to parents understand their offsprings better that when childrens go to bed parents could tell a couple stories and books. This would connect emotionally between parents and their offsprings. Moreover, through stories parents could help children to distinguish good and avoid to do bad things. This is an important role to play in development of children.
On the other hand, it is true that our life has greatly changed ever since the emergence of television, book online and movies that being used more often than the old- fashioned ones. Therefore, children who not yet attending school not only study through their stories by parents told to them but also they could access with information on TV and movies. The children would be provided knowledge about the world where they ever have not seen. Besides, when children attracted by entertainment shows, their parents would have many time for their self. However, with a huge amount of information on TV, movies that are not controlled cause negative effect on children's minds. For instance, when children watch the bloody film , they tend to act like violent characters on films.
In conclusion, each methods have aspect different. It should be combined together to help children to healthy development
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06622516556 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4640436192 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2625532089 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339217757604 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103379670366 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830309447748 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197467169404 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120363109477 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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