You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s place. When you returned home, you discovered that you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
tell him that you left the coat behind
explain what the coat looks like
make some suggestions about how to get the coat back
Sample response
Dear John,
I hope you are doing well. Thank you so much for the great weekend. I really enjoyed myself during the two days I spent at your place.
By the way, I think I have forgotten my coat in your house. That is the main reason I am writing this letter. I discovered this only after reaching home. If my memory serves me right, I left it in the bedroom.
I have a special attachment to this coat. It is a gift from my brother. It is a long, black leather coat with two big outer pockets and one secret pocket inside. It contains my credit cards, a family photo and my flight ticket to London. I am more concerned about these things than the coat.
Actually, the flight ticket is only valid for this month and since my cards are inside the coat I can’t do any financial transactions. As you can see, I’m in a real fix now.
Could you check if my coat is in the bedroom? And if you find it, could you send it to me through speed post as soon as possible? I would really appreciate it.
Hoping to hear from you soon
Best Regards
Erum Jahangir
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-08-09 | iram jahangir | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r pockets and one secret pocket inside. It contains my credit cards, a family phot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, really, so, well, i think, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33980582524 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24515481499 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626213592233 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3082234232 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.6666666667 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4444444444 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332774955603 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948512415078 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707333451126 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170220677275 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618974770254 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.71 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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