Some people believe that they have right to keep all their earnings and can neglect taxes. Do you agree or disagree with this?
Throughout history, governments always need money but people want their money to use privately. Moreover, lots of people think a big part of that money which they gave to the government is wasted all the time, so the right of paying tax is a controversial question. In my opinion, people should pay their tax because its advantages far more than its disadvantages.
The first reason that comes to my mind is that however, this is true which people have the right to keep their money and spend it privately, paying tax has social benefits. If people pay their share of the money, as a rule, social safety and other public services will improve around society. In this context, the society has more safety services such as fire station or medical services. On the other hand, taxation decreases the gap in society and consequently a decrease in crimes. Since the part of the money in which people who gave it to government redistribute to poor and treatment of criminals, it decreases the rate of crime and therefore we have healthier urban and suburban places.
On the other hand, the second and more important cause of taxation which I mentioned as a good happening to the country is it helps to economic development. In countries which are not reliable (Dependable) to natural resources such as Iran, Saudi Arabia, and Venezuela that the most part of their government’s budget is producing and selling oil or other natural resources, in other countries tax is the most important part of their source of a budget. In the first type of courtiers which I mentioned before, the fluctuation of oil price cause the instability, therefore their economic growth does not have a reliable source to spend. In contrast, countries in which people tax a share of their money to the government, its budget is more dependable to use it as a source of development and growth.
This is a true story in which people do not find it suitable to share their price of works and money to governments which use a large part of that in cases in which they are not affected. The studies show that the advantage of taxation in countries is very influenced in all people life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 639, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es not have a reliable source to spend. In contrast, countries in which people tax...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75466666667 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72926526539 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.035338704 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.357142857 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164136155035 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660350555746 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459228840241 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117508507873 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350055637356 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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