Writing Task 2
Buying on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Buying things on the internet has been parted by most of us in our daily life. More and more people actively involved in online shopping. Due to the simplicity reason, some consumers argue that this is the best way to buy things in this busy modern world. It is believe that before we decide use this kind of way of trading, people should outweigh the advantages and disadvantages. That is necessary to avoid dead loss.
Critical thinking needs to be aimed to quality of product that sold in online shops. Since we barely see it virtually on screen, we cannot measure how reliable and valid the wr...
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Sentence: It is believe that before we decide use this kind of way of trading, people should outweigh the advantages and disadvantages.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and believe
there will be more people access this lifestyle.
there will be more people accessing this lifestyle.
Sentence: Since it benefits our life by helping us economize our time.
Description: The word benefits is not usually used as a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to benefits
It is obviously give them another alternative of shopping.
It will obviously give them another alternative of shopping.
online shopping is become favorable nowadays.
online shopping is becoming favorable nowadays.
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.478 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.754 7.5
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2 (two verbs in one sentence.)
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 356 350
No. of Characters: 1666 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.344 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.68 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.52 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.478 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.754 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.435 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.281 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.486 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5