Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated
The claim suggests that government funding is mandatory for cities to thrive or flourish better.The reason quoted for the recommendation is that cities are the place where nation's cultural tradition is preserved and generated.Though the claim seems to acceptable, i disagree with the reason provided for asserting the claim.The reason for the disagreement is basically most of the well known cities are recently developed,consequently they are more influenced by either developed or the country with they perform trade.Finally the proportion of city population when compared to whole nation is very ...
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Sentence: A detail analysis will depict that the culture prevailing is completely different from the one that is prevailing in other partsmostly villages of the country.
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 497 350
No. of Characters: 2427 1500
No. of Different Words: 214 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.722 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.883 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.643 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 184 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 133 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 102 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.88 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.126 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.56 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.309 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.522 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5