In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes, what are the causes?
How should these young criminals to be punished.
Recent years witness an increasing number of crimes committed by young people. There could be several reasons for this trend and some methods can be adopted to punish young criminals.
Three main reasons may weight heavily in the rise of young delinquency. The major one would be lack of the previously ever-present attention of parents. Rapid economic development in recent years forces a great number of migrant workers move from city to city in search of work. This may cause millions of children to be left behind in rural areas mostly under the care of grandparents with little or no education. These children are very likely to suffer from development issues and become involved in crimes. Another reason is campus bullying, and this may cause the anti-social behaviors. Finally, young people have been exposed to too much inappropriate contents from the TV or the Internet, which may lead to the rise of violent and sexual crimes.
It is not easy to decide how to punish young offenders. On the one hand, young delinquents are immature and flexible, meaning that they should be treat differently in comparison to adult counterparts. This is extremely important in the cases of petty crimes, such as shoplifting and picking pocket. These young offenders could be punished by volunteering in their communities or warning. On the other hand, punishment should fit the crime regardless of the age when it comes to serious violent crimes, such as murder, armed robbery, arsenal, which means prison sentences or even death penalty could be considered. Otherwise, it would be unfair to victims and their families as well as to law-abiding individuals.
In conclusion, several ways can be taken to give young delinquents appropriate punishments despite the fact that there is an increasing number of crimes involving young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'treated'?
Suggestion: treated
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15100671141 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79614786142 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5548773819 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228522695319 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734248159916 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363434700329 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13133447763 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315823582288 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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