sport and social activities are asimportant as a class or library in a university
A university is a place to foster students' skills both academically and socially. Dividing of budgets among academic educational system and other parts of university like sport and social activities is always a controversial argument among universities officials and also students. Even though some people think the dominant goal of each university is educating students scientifically and universities must focus their financial support on them, but, I, personally, subscribe to this idea that proving social and mental skills among students is as important as academic aspects. All persons who want to be a successful person in real life, must improve their social and mental skills that it will be accessed in universities via some activities. Also, as far as educational aspect is concerned, the mental conditions among the students of a university is a significant parameter affecting it.
Firstly, educated persons will not be prosper in their life unless get train in all aspects, sport and social aspects beside academic educational aspect, in their universities. If people have a lot of knowledges in their life, but are not versatile and extroverted persons, they wouldn’t thrive in their job and even their personal life. Everyone must be able to get along with their colleagues while they are working. Social skill if isn’t more useful character for a person, undoubtedly is an equal one in comparison to educational skills. Additionally, every person needs to be healthy in both physical and mental sights. People can do their best in their life only with fresh and health mind which can reach with some activities like sports. Hence, it is very important for every university to spend equal money for social and sport activities besides educational centers like classes and libraries. For example, Esfahan University in Iran don’t train thrive people because of lacking of social and sport activities among its students. In fact, these students bother from lack of proper sport and social places in their university. They aren’t happy and active during studying period that lead to setback their skills even in education. In opposite, Sharif University considers equal financial support for both educational, social and sport activities. Students who educate in this university are always active and be trained in versatile way. They are success not only during their studying but also in their work and life.
Secondly, one of the important duty of a university is prepare conditions for student with less cost of living. Nowadays, most people notice all their required in order to have more prosperous life. They do their educational or work tasks along with some social and sport activities. They consider these aspects of their life to enrich their mental conditions and enjoy from their life. If a university don’t spend enough money to prepare these places with a state-of-the-art level, most student must go off-campus ones that not only will increase their cost of living but also get more time of them to attend off-campus centers. These will cause involving students in secondary matters like getting part job to passing life, following getting away from their educational goals.
In summary, in my opinion, sport and social activities have equal importance with academic educational aspects in a university. Hence, universities must financially support these universities centers as well as educational places like classes. By considering this, the universities will be able to have more active and happier students with more skill which need for everyone to reach success in his or her life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in fact, in summary, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3074.0 1977.66487455 155% => OK
No of words: 576.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33680555556 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89897948557 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83493282739 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427083333333 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 984.6 618.680645161 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7014485341 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.851851852 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227688776029 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858384185551 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788585284524 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172210407935 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650633442453 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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