In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Overeating junk food is a much-discussed problem and has some effects on people's health which appears to be rising in most countries. Committing a higher rate of fast food taxation is paramount for the government as a solution to this phenomenon. I personally agree with this opinion, which I will explain below.
First and foremost, it seems that a cheaper cost of fast food would encourage people to buy this kind of food, hence, it would be better to raise the tax in order to reduce the proportion of people who are suffering the disease. In addition, it appears that a higher tax could trigger people to eat home-cooked food, which is healthier than fast food. Furthermore, imposing a higher fast-food taxation would cause more people to eat traditional food rather than international food, such as junk food which contains many chemical ingredients. As a result, also, people would avoid health problem involving consumption of junk food.
Looking from another perspective, it might be said that eating too much fast food is not the only one problem which can suffer a disease for people. So that would the higher tax be ineffective step to reduce this phenomenon. In my opinion, however, while there are some problems causing health problem for people, junk food outweigh other causes that cannot be ignored.
In summary, it is logical to conclude that higher fast-food taxation should be applied in some communities. not only would this food tax encourage people to eat home-cooked food but to consume a traditional food aw well
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also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, look, so, well, while, in addition, in summary, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01556420233 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74730215934 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525291828794 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.521218412 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423449065442 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180012698615 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552551306786 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283640959326 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266351615872 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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