Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Apparently, improving public health has come into focus of attention since some serious diseases have become widespread. Regarding this fact, opinions are divided as to whether we can prevent this tendency by providing necessary sports amenities or other measures are required in order to tackle this pressing problem .Personally, it’s my firm conviction that there are strong arguments on behalf of each point of view, so before jumping to a quick conclusion this topic needs to be discussed in detail.
To begin with, being an essential part of healthy lifestyle, sports play an indispensable r...
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