"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels."
It has been considered that the number of shoppers have been decreases due to a fancy and fun activity called skateboarding and it has been recommended that if the skateboarding activity is prohibited here, there are major chances of the business being raised to the previously high levels.
It is really a very big assumption that the number of shoppers have been decreases due to some random activity called skateboarding. To weaken this argument, we may analyse it in a way that there are numerous Plazas present along with a separate gaming zone within them and they are still progressing with even a higher level comparatively.In order to attract customers and again expecting an increase in the number of shoppers, different promotional steps must be taken and tried. Since marketing is all about the different strategies to attract customers and there can be nothing as constant. So vendors must try and list out whatever is working out for them and what not. They must particularly look into the loop-holes and compare the quality and variety of the products that they are selling and then modify their marketing strategy accordingly.
The second biggest assumption here is, about the Litter and Vandalism . If a proper management committee is set to minimize this issue, then we can improve this as well.The Plaza’s management shall deploy variety of measures about this issue. There must be a SPOC management for every lobby, that looks after and controls all these activities and a proper fine-system must be implemented on-the-spot for the vandalism that is being noticed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look, may, really, second, so, still, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 55.5748502994 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 2260.96107784 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 260.0 441.139720559 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13461538462 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88352806058 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565384615385 0.468620217663 121% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 705.55239521 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8674647297 57.8364921388 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.333333333 119.503703932 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 23.324526521 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.70786347227 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138139961794 0.218282227539 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526087433783 0.0743258471296 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693169782569 0.0701772020484 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106295901497 0.128457276422 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680532094258 0.0628817314937 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.3799401198 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.3550499002 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 12.3882235529 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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