Many contries aim to improve living standard by economic d3velopment but some social values are lost as a result .do you think the advantages of economic development outweighted the disadvantages.
A genration ago, people had no reach to advanced technology but now humans are enjoying all facilities. However the main priorty of every nation to take an advancement in human life. Consequently, due to this, growth, few social values get declined also. In my opinion, there are more benifits of economic development than drawbacks.
One the one hand,economy level also improve the quality of life; hence, people have a huge money to spend on various things such as food, health, transportion ectectra.In addition to this, more and more job opportunities for society, put the feeling of self dependence , becauseof ability to earning.For example,a policy of 'ghar ghar rojgar' in India ,not only give chance to average income people also for lower encome people for earn money by doing work for society.
On the other hand , high social standard vanish the human reality ,that is to say , person become more materialistic and money minded, as well as, prefer to earn a huge money so either never give a time to family nor friends because of their busy job schedule. For intance , my cousin brother works as an architect and want to a luxries life , at that reason he has lost the link with his family.
All in all, world development is crucial for humanity but improvement of drawbacks is neccessary. In my view, this problem can be solve by efforts of government , society, especially by a indiviual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95762711864 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73782082404 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694915254237 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.190107026 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804439018647 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384137816987 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401464525189 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495220280262 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237733516354 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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