Some people think that we are influencing in our world in bad manner and the air pollution is the worst one.
What are the solution and what we human can to do reduce the problem?
It is clear/certain that (we human are contaminating the nature as the population increases). Among the contaminators, air pollution has been the serious/worst/dangerous/hazardous/harmful one. I will discuss below what people can do to solve this problem, the reasons behind it and possible solutions. Air pollution is caused by exhaust fumes from vehicles and factories and, most importantly, coal overconsumption from ger district areas. Let’s find the solution together.
P2:Firstly, there is unofficial statistics that cars and factories are responsible for about 60% of air pollution.
Firstly, according to unofficial statistics, cars and factories cause/account for about 60% of air pollution, with equal contributions. Since cars emit 30% of the pollution, in order to reduce the toxics, the government need to impose heavy taxes for unqualifed vehicles. In this way, by doing so, thanks to it, therefore, as a result, non-emission public transport utilization will rise and air pollution will come down by certain degree/point/level/amount. While to lessen toxic smokes released by industrials regions, the government need to demand that [factories must use renewable energies from solar, wind and water]. By using such approaches/strategies, it is possible to trim toxic gases from atmosphere and we will be left with fresh air.
P3: Secondly, within the context of reducing smoke emission from ger area, the state officials should make efforts to develop/improve basic infrastructures. If we take ger area coal consumption as an example, the coal usage share/portion/ reflects/is attributed to/belong to/produces 50 percent of the emission. Considering these facts, additional measures should be taken by the government to provide affordable housing for ger area and to install thermal pipelines across the regions. By the way/thereby, I hope that we could leave healthy environment with fresh air to our future/descendents/coming generation.
P4: In conclusion, as we have seen, there are so many ways to crack the problem at our hands. Personally, I believe that building thermal infrastructure is the most feasible approach in terms of financing and time/given time pressure and financing capability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71903323263 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.14136477953 2.80592935109 148% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634441087613 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9550853996 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.352941176 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215228206111 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626191104557 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538703955134 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10689170184 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842932282092 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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