Write a letter to your friend about a job offer that can be suitable for him/her and say
Describe the job
what are the facilities available
why this job suitable for him
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to pleased to pleased to congrats you to complete your PHD in digital computer. Also, I like to inform you that one vacancy is suitable for you in many company regarding research and development area for computing.
As you know well, currently , I am working in India healthcare company as a multi national company. As of now 7000 people who are workig in my company. They are planning to hire who will fit in to research and analytics department and specially they are looking for PHD resources. Also I would like to inform that you will get lots of benefits such as bus transport facility,Food and health insurance all are free. Also, health insurance will cover your family members as well. You can expect good hike on each and every year.
I know that you are very much intersted in research and development area and I hope definitely you will enjoy this job, Also, you can proove yourself on your right area.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
your affectionately,
john.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to pleased'.
Suggestion: to pleased
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to pleased to pleased to congrats you to complete your PHD in...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun company seems to be countable; consider using: 'many companies'.
Suggestion: many companies
...that one vacancy is suitable for you in many company regarding research and development area...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...omputing. As you know well, currently , I am working in India healthcare compan...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...national company. As of now 7000 people who are workig in my company. They are planning...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...lly they are looking for PHD resources. Also I would like to inform that you will ge...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Food
... benefits such as bus transport facility,Food and health insurance all are free. Also...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...ok forward to hearing from you soon. your affectionately, john.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75555555556 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60168790438 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594444444444 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5157769396 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8181818182 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12446355531 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446538879825 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441975182391 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746589580422 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566232898785 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.