City council is planing to pull down one of the historic buildings in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it. As a citizen you don't want it to happen. Write a letter to a city council and say
What is the importance of the building?
Why should it be renovated?
Suggest a plan to raise funds and maintain the building in future.
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter regarding to renovate our traditional buildings rather than pull it down from our town.
To begin with, this building always reminding us our old historical people traditional life and it showcase their ancient art. Also, over all building will inform us their Symbol as "V" that is called victory. However many of them do not know this information and I have read one of the famous artical about this detail. Please reconsider this matter and we can collect the fund re innovate it.
I read a newspaper for that last week and I have gonr through that matter about budget for tourism and development, government alloted 10 crores for this in order to this we can send a requset letter to the central government and state government to renovate this building. Also , my friend whose uncle is ministor of tourism and development so I can follow up with this to get fund quickly to re modify it.
I hope, I am looking for a feedback soon.
yours sincerely,
john.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'showcases'?
Suggestion: showcases
...storical people traditional life and it showcase their ancient art. Also, over all buil...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people traditional life and it showcase their ancient art. Also, over all buildi...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s 'V' that is called victory. However many of them do not know this informati...
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Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...vernment to renovate this building. Also , my friend whose uncle is ministor of to...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...e, I am looking for a feedback soon. yours sincerely, john.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, regarding, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80681818182 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60592263407 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0110738986 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150493570779 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638820143049 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456945780379 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896402019939 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710220244958 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.