Characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development rather than experiences we may have in our life.
Innate characteristics have a preponderant impact on our life as they are nature of a person and have a supreme effect on personality. In addition to this, experiences are also of prime importance but they are sometimes neglected.
The qualities we are born with whether positive or negative have a pivotal role in determining our personality. The traits like sagacity, tenacious in achieving passion etc are a sign for a bright future while the characteristics like sluggishness, anomie etc are obstacles towards a dignified future. It is very important to mould the innate characteristics according to the need of the time to live a successful life ahead. The role of parents is parallel important in polishing the good qualities or uprooting the negative ones. For example, Nelson Mendala was a born philanthropist. He acknowledged it and whole life he struggled for Black People. Today his lifetime endeavour is a beacon of light for the oppressed ones.
Experiences enlighten for us a right path and direction to move on. They are vital for a composed personality and maturity as they shield us from severe dangers in life. Not only experiences reflect the true face of life but also act as a mentor to modify our by birth characteristics. For example, scientists learn more and more from their experiences and this thing help them a lot in serving mankind. These experiences also enable them to invent or make new discoveries without major failures because experiences keep on enhancing their knowledge and boosting their confidence.
To recapitulate, qualities we are born with have a conspicuous effect on our life. Moreover, the importance of experiences is unprecedented to earn cache in life.
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| 2018-09-09 | Zainab Waqas | 73 | view |
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? 64
- Characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development rather than experiences we may have in our life. 73
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishm 56
- Characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Give your opinion. 56
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Give your opinion and relative examples from your own experiences. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1690647482 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23152342508 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553956834532 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7520726456 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314058106219 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100758022237 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118067089927 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222221779077 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895127634641 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.