Immigration has the major impact on society
What are the main reasons of immigration?
To what consequences it can lead?
In this contemporary time, people have been immigrating other countries for supply their fundamental necessity. By associating these movement, it become certain that hidden dangerous consequences and plenty of causes, inducing people to do it, is existing. In this essay, I will explore some of the significant reasons and result.
Firstly, there are wide-range of reasons, particularly starvation and severe circumstances are leading to move from their hometown. In addition, this is an issue because food is one of the inevitable requirement. Let's take Africans as example, there have been lot of people, who are impoverished, change their nation in order to prove their subsistence. As result, if these people enter the wealthy country, they would live on somehow.
Secondly, it is undeniable true that people, specially children, elders and those who are disadvantaged have to reside in pleasurable atmosphere. In contrast, people have been persisting hazardous surroundings. For example, Syrian peasantry are looking for place, where they can be alive in well manner. In terms of consequences, one good news was that some of the lucky person have accessed in wealthy country but later it have revealed that terrorists have entered with those, moreover plethora of people was killed by those unaware people. As result, many children stay without parents.
In conclusion, despite such difficulties, that pushing us to refuse those people, being able to welcome is most appreciable thing truly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46551724138 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95742430195 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668103448276 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2213829659 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.056841667958 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0192030911375 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265929401602 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0337498956562 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398478509638 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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