A nation should introduce the same study curriculum for every student in school before they enter college
A curriculum is comprised of courses of study. Students are a very important wealth of a nation. It is highly understandable that a nation wants to make their students more advanced so that they can know what are the important researches and advancements that are happening all over the world. But, although it is very important to keep them updated about every aspect of modern facilities through advanced study, it is not acceptable to introduce the same study curriculum for every student in a nation.
It is always important to keep the students updated about the advancements in modern times. They can gather knowledge from newspapers, internet etc. From these vast knowledge bases, they can choose their subject of interest and motivate themselves to pursue them. The schools, of course, play an important role in this process. They introduce new information in their study curriculum so that they can engender enthusiasm inside student minds.
Although this process helps them to motivate students, it is unconscionable to introduce a system where every student in a nation has to go through the same study curriculum until they enter college. It is quite possible that every student will not like the same study courses. As the schools will try to feed them the information, the students may develop an antipathy towards the study system, which may have further bad consequences and may affect the student minds.
Instead of introducing the same study system for all students in a nation, the teachers first should identify what are the key courses that must be included in the study curriculum. Then after students develop what new subjects they like, they can inform the teachers so that he/she can get help from them and get more information on that subject. It is not difficult to observe a diversity among student interests and an ideal school will try to encourage their students to learn new aspects of their subject of interest. This particularly will help surely when they will enter college, where they can specialize themselves on the subject of their interest.
Carefully considering all the arguments above, it will be conducive for the students if they can get the opportunity to explore the diversity. Therefore a nation should not introduce a study system where every student will have to go through the same study curriculum. Instead, it will be helpful if the teachers analyze the need of the students so that everyone can cope up with every information they teach and the students can enthusiastically involve themselves in the study curriculum.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09669811321 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76497890716 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422169811321 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9076620013 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.736842105 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3157894737 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428672467514 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156242225752 0.0831039109588 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117669794118 0.0758088955206 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281698562615 0.150359130593 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688973012497 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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