Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life.
People always are looking for gaining success in the different aspects of their lives. They consider all matters involving in their future and their goals to reach success like improving their mental abilities, providing the proper external condition of their lives and so on. One of the controverted involved matter is announcing of our achievement and skills among some influential people like our employers. In my opinion such an act give people a good opportunity to be success in their future life. It create a good atmosphere for individuals to use of professional people's councils. It not to mention that they will get face in their workplaces, University and so forth which give them a chance to be trusted by others and find new beneficial conditions to go toward more success.
In first place, human beings cannot be relied only in themselves, I mean they need to exert other experiences in their lives. If individuals talk about their abilities and their up-to-now attainments with others especially with the effective people like their employers or supervisors, will be able to broaden their horizon. The expert humans always bring people some ne point by which they can follow their future goals more trustworthy. For example, two months ago I went to our manager's office and present myself completely. I pointed out to all of my accomplishments and mentioned all of my abilities like software information, language knowledge and some more. After listening to my talk, he started to talk about his experiences and knowledge. He illustrated me how he found his way to be success in his job. He compare my achievement and skills with himself and showed me some new way to follow my goal. Now, I feel my progress in my job is thank to that conversation.
Secondly, the head of each activity, of the enterprises, educational center, named but a few, choose individuals based on their backgrounds. If we want to take apart to such an activity, we must make sure that our head knows about our abilities. It is crystal clear that our previous accomplishments are reliable proofs by which employers, professors and others can trust on us. For instance, when I used to graduate from university we had a commencement in the time of which I communicated with one of our professors. I talk about my achievements and skills all of which show my expert in research. I explain all of my thesis, the articles and more like these. It was a great chance because at the same time he was looking for a researcher to work as an assistance in his laboratory. He fixed an interview for some days later which lead me to be an employee in a big university. It get me toward my dream, working in an educational system, by which I meet the proper outcomes of it as soon as possible. It caused me literary to be success.
In the summary, by taking all of these into account, in my opinion, it is important to make aware the influential people in our lives from our knowledges, accomplishments and abilities. It gives us a good opportunity to use others information and broaden our perspective which can guarantee our future success. it is obvious that other can belief us to give us some job position, educational position an so forth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 508, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
... to be success in their future life. It create a good atmosphere for individuals to us...
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Line 2, column 818, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
...nd his way to be success in his job. He compare my achievement and skills with himself ...
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Line 2, column 948, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thanked'.
Suggestion: thanked
...l. Now, I feel my progress in my job is thank to that conversation. Secondly, the h...
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Line 3, column 885, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
... be an employee in a big university. It get me toward my dream, working in an educa...
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Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...which can guarantee our future success. it is obvious that other can belief us to ...
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Line 4, column 401, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...some job position, educational position an so forth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i mean, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2670.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 556.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80215827338 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94217558694 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474820143885 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 846.0 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1234453214 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3571428571 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116316892928 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354103804239 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333114969834 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079119897731 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226715549318 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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